Another Quick-ish Update

Added some more to Chapter 1 last night. I started the story, introduced the King (still unnamed) and his head adviser, Eldridge (name blatantly stolen from Rich) Also gave the necessary back story, and created the majority of the kingdom (the parts of it that we'll be visiting in this story anyway). A few more pages should leave me off in a great position to start Chapter 2. Speaking of Chapter 2... I also started re-working it a little. Chapter 2 is mostly fine, it's 4 that really needs help. As for 2, certain parts of it happen very fast, so I'm planning on adding here and there to make it not seem so rushed like it does. If you read it during the two weeks it was posted here, then I'm sure you know I'm referring to Graves' escape from the old lady and the first fairy scene. They both seem to just *BANG!* happen. I'm keeping it all in there but it needs to be re-written. I also want to add more to the description of Degaulington's Den. The place has a certain atmosphere that needs to be described and I might as well have left it out. So that will be fixed as well.

Chapter 1 is almost done so I'll be posting it here when it is. you guys can actually get a chance to read this story from the beginning instead of starting on Chapter 2. Look for it very soon! Maybe tonight!